Improved Storyboard

We decided to change our ideas because we felt that on our other storyboard the two narratives may be complicated, and may get confusing to our target audience. Our new storyboard of ideas includes one narrative, helping the continuity of the video flow from beginning to end. We also found from our research that it was not typical of the Indie genre to have two storylines.












This is the directors pitch that we will now be using: